This story is so amazing. I absolutely love it. Every other week or so, I re-read all the chapters so far. I really hope you update soon and continue with this. :)
<small>So I had a fever with major headaches but out of no where i find this story. I could barely stay awake from exhaustion but here i was reading 'till midnight saying "just one more chapter". haha What else can i say but I love you for writing such an amazing story. Florrie is wonderful and Oli we can't forget about him. I love your depiction of him. It really is different can't compare to any other story. No doubt about it!
I am really such a pathetic commenter, and you'll probably hate the shortness of my comment but I've nothing else to say but I love this. I truly and honestly do, I love Florrie and Oli and everyone here. I love how you write and all that other stuff that I should probably delve into more but I'm honestly blank because this is amazing.
grihfdioskzugyikuhilj; I love the Harry Potter references and the lyrical references in their songs, but I have to say, I LOVE that you've included his sleep paralysis. I honestly, do. People never know enough about Oli to write a fic and you do, you've honestly impressed me to an extent where I can't even... explain how much respect I have for you and the way you write. <3
I just finished reading this and I have to say this is the sweetest Oliver fic I've read, there are so many good things about this story, mainly the Harry Potter references :3. Florrie is just so.. Awesome, I love her character, she reminds me so much of Hermione Granger. Carol is the mother I wish I had and Florrie's mom is the mom I wouldn't wish upon anyone. I'm only having one issue with this story, where is Florrie's dad through out all of this? It's like he disappeared. Other then that I'm very happy with this story.
Oh my gosh, that last chapter made my heart ache. I think you wrote it perfectly! I seriously cannot wait to see what else you have in store for this story. It's so lovely.
hi! I love you! i think our obsessions with eachothers stories is rather unhealthy. you're my new mibba bfffl ;D andddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd thank you for the update and the kudos. I still love you. This chapter was what i've been waiting for. i think it's so cute how he's just so sweet to her and not an asswipe like he is to everyone else...
So, I stayed up literally until 3:30am reading this. Holy jesus, I love this so much. Everything about each character is absolutely wonderful. Oliver has to be my favorite. He's such a boy, but still vulnerable, and shy at times. The latest character revealed his very much human side, and I really enjoyed that. I also love Florrie because she is very strong, and naturally wonderful. And goodness me, Matt Kean. I love that bloke to pieces. He's such a goof ball, but I absolutely adore him for always sticking up for Florrie. Makes me miss my great guy friends. I was weary of Claudia at first because of the initial lunch table scene, but she's a sweetheart and I've been won over. Also, I love adorable little Tom. He makes me happy. :> The point of my rambling is, this is a fabulous story with very well developed characters. Mibba lacks well developed characters, so I definitely appreciate every second of the ones in this story. I love your writing style, keep doing what you're doing, love!
Just finished reading this. I really do enjoy it. I love the plotline. I think your portrayl of the guys are very accurate. And Florrie is awesome. But seriously....MORE MORE MORE. WRITE MORE. :D
UGH I FINALLY FINISHED! Yes. I've been reading this since yesterday and I'm so proud to have read it all through and through. I love this. Florrie--just totally and completely amazing. Oliver--I honestly do like the way you portrayed him in this. It's a lot different than most Oli fics so HIGH FREAKING FIVE for you. :D Tom--lols.
I actually would be kind of curious to see a Tom fic from you, I love the way you write. :) I had loads more to say but I forgot. :l